Karess Lee
WRD110
September 26,2014
Reflection Blog
Ms.Lopez

My reflection on my documentary. When I begin to right I find myself really getting involved in my writing and really expressing how I feel. My writing process for the formal proposal was to really hit the key point so that the readers would be informed but also interested. I use the strategy for mostly all my papers but now that I am in college it is time to switch things up. Writing this paper has made me learned more things from my teacher and peers that would really help me in the future with more  papers. I feel like that way I adapted to turning it into the Shark Tank presentation was just okay it wasn't what I would have liked it to be so I give myself and okay job.  It was a little awkward because two people has done the same organization so I really didn't want to bore them. I feel like my strengths in the writing proposal is that I had a good introduction and I gave good information to the readers about that organization and the history of the organization. The strength in my presentation was my visual I believe that I had good pictures. I also believe I was really good on eye contact I wasn't always looking down and very good on speaking I wasn't quite I was just right. My weakness in my paper I'm really not that sure because I haven't heard back from my teacher but I hope it isn't a lot. I recognized my weakness in my presentation which was that I went to fast and I didn't give a lot of information like I should have but that is because for the first time I got nervous which really isn't like me because I love presentation but then again I also had a rough morning but I was disappointed at myself because I was really nervous for no reason but since I know what I messed up at now so for my next presentation I WILL ACE ITTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!